Ok, first of all I dont give a crap about how hard you tried to make this, I mean seriously all it is is porn, I dont care how much effort you put into it, the end result is your making something for people to jack off to.

Also, its friggin Naruto. Dude, little kids watch this (I also don't give a crap about how the Japanese take it as a serious show), so congratulations for making a porn out of a show with viewers the ages of 7-14. Isn't the girl your animating supposed to be like age 13 or 14 anyway?
Oh, and almost forgot. Since its Naruto, that also means you didnt even make an effort into making your own character.

And finally, the end result is crap. Don't tell me this bullsh*t is hard. I've seen dozens of speed animations done with twice the speed of this video, about 7 minutes in length, 100% better than the drawings in this one, and also they made original characters made without friggin reference photos from some T.V series.

Overall:
You didn't think of your own character, you put hardly any effort into drawing the character, the whole animation is a porno of a kid show on cartoon network, the character is only 13 or 14 years old according to the idea which you stole, and to top it off you animated it by literally just moving the objects up and down and in order to animate the eyes and mouth you replaced them with just another picture at different times.

Lets make this even simpler. So far you've ignored copyright, animated a nude underage girl, made a porno out of a childrens show, and done it all the the quickest way possible.

Are you proud of yourself for this?
Seriously the only reason why I think you've gotten the score so far is because of a bunch of perverts who want to thank you for making an excuse for why hentai shouldn't be seen as just porn.
I'm not saying this to insult you, I'm saying this because I think its true.

Oh, and by the way, anyone who disagrees please send me a PM explaining why this animation deserves the score it has.

I dunno, this one kinda got to me (might just be because its the last episode). Lol its funny but yet, at the same time I was kind of sulking for how bad Jerry's life sucked even though he's a normal guy (does that kinda make sense?). Oh well, laughed anyway cause I know sometimes when life just sucks so bad the only thing you can possibly do is laugh.
Oh, and also watched your commentary. Honestly and truly I didn't even think of lightning possibly striking his mom. However I was trying to think of a way you would cut her aside from the story and as soon as it struck her I thought, "Holy crap, ofcourse." Lol, took me by so much surprise.
Anyway, I still felt bad for Jerry even though it ended in a happy attitude, because I was thinking "She's still going to steal money from him and dump him when he's older, plus he's going to commit suicide and go to hell." Still, a good flash though.
I dunno, all I can say is it's not like any other series I've seen on NG. Also sounded like you didn't know where to take this series to an end so you kinda quick wrapped it up (no offense if you take any).
Sidenote: I don't mean to sound like a gimme-gimme fan or anything, but are you going to create any other animations of Joan and Mark? It was one of the first animations I had seen of yours and it looked like it could have been a very entertaining / enjoyable series.
Overall, pretty good work bro!

Well, its not exaclty the best joke around I guess, but its a bit funnier than most of the jokes I hear on newgrounds. Didn't feel like it was supposed to make me bust a gut or anything but it actually did make me chuckle a bit.
Good artwork, and good timing, the audio sounded a lil cheesy but im not sure if it was done on purpose or not. Even if it wasn't on purpose, its not really distracting from the joke and if its going to be funny you dont really need to focus on high quality everything (drawing, audio, whatever)

Overall: Was a good animation, nothing suggestive or over-the-top slap-stick. Good for an ok chuckle. Joke was wierd in a way, but still funny.
If you want better scores then you might want to think into the joke a little more but if the scores don't really matter and you like it the way it is then keep doing it whatever style you like bro!